Tuesday, May 1, 2007

My ever first song I have written...Khmer version!

I have no experience to write a song; I just write what I feel it's a bit gone along with melody. It's not in standard. So if you dont mind, would you just give some feedback. Maybe next time I could get improvement to write good piece. This song with my own melody is like folk rock...i guess:)( no copy from other songs hehe...at least better than...)

ចិត្តអានាថា!!!

I សូរសមុទ្របក់ផាត់ដោយទឹករលក

ធ្វើអោយចិត្តខ្្ញុំនឹកគិតរហូត

ចិត្តដែលមម៊ៃហាក់បីដូចចង់និយាយ

រាល់ពេលយប់ថ្ងៃព្រូយខ្លាចព្រូយភ័យ

II វិថីជិវិតមាននៅវែងអន្លាយ

នឿយកាយនឿយចិត្តព្រោះគិតវែងឆ្ងាយ

ចិត្តដែលមិនសប្បាយលាក់ទុកក្នុងកាយ

ដេកគិតដេកស្តាយរិះរកវិធី

III ចិត្តអើយមានមូយ​ គ្មានពីរគិតវក់វី

គ្រប់ទិសទីអោយតែរស់ស៊ី

ចិត្តដែលលោភលន់ក៏លិចឡើងធ្លោល

ហាក់ពុះកញ្ឆ្រោលចង់បានភ្លាមភ្លាម

Chorus: ចិត្តអើយ​ ចិត្តអើយ​ ចិត្តអើយ

នាក់កំពុងគិតពីអ្វី ពីអ្វី​ ពីអ្វី

ហេតុអ្វីមិននិយាយស្តីអោយ បានច្បាស់…….

ប្រាប់មកបានទេ…… What the hell are you thinking of…..?

Repeat III and Chorus.

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

i promised to be the first person who comment this, tell the truth, i dont know how is the melody but i think the lyric is too simple, frankly, better use some special word, hm... dont know what to say, will tell you latter when we talk. Anyways, i really support you guys!! go!!! ^__^

Anonymous said...

i promised to be the first who comment this,hm... dont know what will the melody come out, but tell the truth the lyric is too simple, better use the special word.hm... i dont know what to correct it too, i will tell you if i get chance. ok? Anyways, you did a great job, so proud of you, continue and you will be best! ^__^

youngster said...

thanks for ur thoughtful and helpful comments! yeah i will keep it up lolz...

Anonymous said...

guess, who is me? hahah... sound so upset dol houy samuth!! just tell you the truth te na! i dont like fliting pp so, anyways... i really hope to hear your song some day. good luck to you!!!

youngster said...

okay, Hi to anonymous who visited my blog. If there a many ano. ppl, so how do i recognize u but sometime i feel i no.And I dont wana guess lolz cos maybe wrong but just keep it in my mind n heart...:P okie i no ur name may be beautiful as a rose so u dont wana tell right now.Kindly leave ur name phorng next time, so i can note it down my booklet. Dont worry it's not a LOVE note like Death note te:) okie hope to see u soon n pls dont try with my salty voice hehe....All the best in life dudes...

dms_davy said...

ho dear, your memories is too much far from good. how come you dont remember me? -__-" impossible!!! well, i may leave my name here, hope that you gotta feel better.should i introduce myself?
Hi m davy! m 19 and gotta be 20 in 20days.M a friendly and piggy girl, may i be your friend? -__-"

khmerlyric said...

មាន​ចម្រៀង​សម្រាប់​ស្ដាប់​ទេ? ខ្ញុំ​ចង់​ស្ដាប់​​ទំនុក​របស់​វា ។

youngster said...

បាទ!​ កំពុង​កែរសំរួលវា​ មិនទាន់ហ៊ាន បង្ហាញ ខ្លាចខ្មាសគេ!!!hehe....

sth said...

Hey dude.. so sad i can't read yr khmer lyric. Anyway, so happy that you've tried to make up yr own composition.. improve yr guitar hah. Gona meet up with u soon. We're together gona smash up the clowdy sky above our land. Cameor))) NO FAKE SMILE)

youngster said...

sure sth... I always practice my guitar everyday. I hope one day I can play it well, maybe asap....our songs gonna rock on lolz......

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